Nothing too late

Question

I know it's a little late, but why not have some Halloween scare! Write a story about Halloween, with monters, ghosts, witches and anything scary. Tis has to be under  250 words. 

Answer 1

Ray had always wanted a frightening halloween experience. The type that they showed in the movies. He couldn't get his friends to accompany him to the graveyard and he was afraid to go alone. He wanted to see if there were any zombies or ghoulish creatures of the night coming out on Halloween's  night.  He hoped someone might show up at the last moment  and someone did. He sprang up from where he was sitting and ran to greet him. Joey! Joey! It was Joey! he was so glad to see Joey. Joey had left college last year and  returned home for Halloween. Joey had always been his best friend .Joey must have wanted to surprise him with his visit.With joey by his side Ray's fears vanished. He explained to Joey his plans and Joey, although he looked subdued nodded his head. Together, they strolled down the road leading to the graveyard,. Ray had so much to tell Joey! Halfway though, Ray heard voices calling loudly from behind. He turned back and saw his friends waving and calling him. Ray! Ray!  Stop! His friends were panting! Ray!  Joey's mum just called! Joey was killed in an accident on the way home!We have got to go the hospital now! We have been searching for you all over town.

Ray looked increduously at his friends and  laughed.  He turned behind and pointed to Joey. But there was no one there!

Answer 2

one day there was a little boy who was a ghost for halloween and one night he ask his mom if he can walk with his friend at halloween so she said i'll think about it he said ok but can you please let me know once you decide ok dear now go upstairs and get ready for bed ok mom honey let me know when your ready for bed and i'll come to give you a hug ok oh and mom before i go to bed can you read me a bed time story  sure honey thanks mom  so the boy went go up stairs and get ready for bed   and heard somethink come from his moms room so he went and checked and there was nothing in the room besides him  he felt scared so he check his room and there was nothing so he called his mom up to come and read him a story and then he heard nothing come for down stairs but he was sure it was his mom so he didnt worry about it any more but then heard another thing so he went downstairs no one was there  so he check  outside no was there/ were will he next check see you next time

Comments

Hi Lexi. Welcome to ThinkWrite! :-)
It's always nice to have new young members here, but I think you might be a little too young. I'm sure you will have some great stories to tell, but first you need to go to school and learn how to write, like we all did. Then when you do, come back and show us what you've learned. :-)