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Christmas Time

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Christmas

A short, sweet Christmas story or poem, full of seasonal good will and sentiment. Just 250 words (or less) to be judged on December 25th (or soon after if I am full of Christmas cheer on the day!)

The winner will be the one that expresses the Christmas sentiment the best, be it fun or religious, parties or presents. Just make it, well, Christmassy!

Happy Christmas to one and all, and of course, good luck and enjoy writing this seasonal challenge!

set Dec 6, 2011 by Saxon (596 points)
nice challenge!
nice challenge, sure will enter it not been on a while here! and merry christmas everyone!

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As Jon creaked down the steps of his house, he grinned. It was Christmas Eve. Even though Christmas was still a day away, he was still full of joy. Jon crept over to the glowing Christmas tree sitting alone in the cozy room. Jon gently carressed his fingers on the shining onaments, humming "Silver Bells". Suddenly, a clock clanged and Jon fell back on something warm. It was his little sister, Sara. "Jon! Jon!" The sound was muffled. Jon saw a dazzling light and his sister standing over him. It was a dream! It was now Christmas Day! He jumped with joy and sprinted downstairs to see what awaited him. 

answered Dec 7, 2011 by ross19 (142 points)
A lovely story, Ross. I do have one comment. There are two consecutive sentences starting with Jon. I would change the second one to 'he'. Otherwise, nice work.
The best one for me! Well done and a Happy Christmas; keep on writing!
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NOTE: Sorry I went .... 6 words over the limit but that's as short as I could get. I started off with...about 500 words and I had to shorten it and this is as far as I got to. I hope 6 words over the limit won't matter much. Thank you, Cherry. :)

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Mel ran out of bed, into her parents’ room, excitedly. "Mummy! Daddy! Wake up! It's Christmas!"
"No, Mel. It's not. It's still July. The 2nd of July. Now go back to bed. It's only... five in the morning."
"Aww!" Mel walked back into her room, disheartened. 

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Mel woke up the next day and  ran over to her parents’ room and jumped on their bed. "Mummy, daddy! Wake up its Christmas!"
"No, Mel. It's still July. Now go back to bed.”
Mel walked back into her room, very disappointed.

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Mel woke her parents every day, thinking it was Christmas.

"Mummy! Daddy! It's Christmas now! It says that on the calendar. It is 24th! Yayy!"
"No, Mel. It's Christmas Eve. Tomorrow is Christmas. Now go back to bed."
So Mel went back to bed, tired.

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Soon, it was Christmas day, when all was quiet. Mel's parents woke up to find Mel sleeping peacefully in her bed. They were surprised she didn't wake them up, especially on Christmas day.

Mum and dad went into Mel’s bedroom, feeling sorry for her.
"Honey? Wake up. It's Christmas!"
Mel lay asleep.
"We have lots of presents for you!"
Mel didn't get up.
"I have a plan. Come with me!"

 

Mel got up a while later. She heard some music from downstairs. She walked downstairs. She saw a big Christmas banner and saw the whole room decorated. She saw presents under the tree with her name. Mel's waiting finally came to an end and she had the BEST CHRISTMAS ever!!

answered Dec 18, 2011 by CherryBabe (280 points)
nice story
cute
nice twist at the end
haha thank you very much! :)