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Finish The Story II Part 2 (Only for people who entered Finish The Story II with only a part 1)

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IMPORTANT NOTE: 

This challenge is only for "Finish The Story II" enterers. If you did not enter "Finish The Story II, then ignore this challenge... I mean not ignore but you cannot enter if you did not enter. If you do want to enter it, you still can. It's never too later. Yes, you will not get picked in the competition as the winner is already decided, however, you might get picked in a seperate "late enterers" competition. So, if you do want to enter the official challenge (even though the winner is decided), then click on this link: http://thinkwrites.com/4046/finish-the-story-ii.
So this challenge is just for those who entered Finish The Story (no.2). You don't have to, this is only for those who had a PART 1 who entered the challenge. I know for definite that WON had a part 1 so I should see a response by WON and I think Room122 had a part one too. But I am not soo sure about them, please comment below, Room122 if you did have a part one in my challenge. So If you did (which I think you did), I should also see your response below. 

So, now that I have explained the main meaning/concept of this challenge, lets get on with the challenge.

For this challenge:

Well, you basically know what to do.
Just read my Finish The Story II challenge again and that's basically what you do.
So, the main thing is... 
Keep it in the same tone as your part 1. Don't change the tone. And once you have done your part 1, combine em together. So, what I mean is like copy and paste your part one onto here then do a big space and write something like "end of part 1" and at the top of part write "part 1" and then write "part two"... and blah blah blah. 

But remember! I will first judge part 2, the main thing. And then, I will read it all together and will check if it is the same tone. 

And also remember! Write part 2 as if there was never even a part 1 or 2... I mean like as if it's all one story. When you are finished, check all over if part 2 fits with 1 and if it sounds like it's all ONE story, not 2 PARTS. 

NO POETRY ACCEPTED. SORRY!

 

And you can start this part 2 however you like! There's no openers for part 2.

 

Judgment system:

I will judge your story (well, basically part 2) by checking/if you have done the following:

  • You have used the same tone as you did with part 1
  • Part 1 and Part 2 fit in together, as if they are one story
  • You have used insteresting words, connectives, openers and punctuation (basically VCOP, if you know what it is, don't worry if you don't)
  • Your story has something special, that makes a reader want to read on

There are more things I can judge by, but I can't think of 'em right now!

Word count:     Minimum = 200 words     Maximum = 872

THE WORD COUNT IS JUST LIKE THE SAME AS "FINISH THE STORY II"

Judgement Day:

I shall judge in 2 weeks time, on November 3rd. Shall there be no one or only one person who has responded by that day, I shall lengthen the deadline.

 

Should you have any concerns, worries, thoughts or questions...? Comment, or send me a personal message.

Good Luck and have fun!

Thanks!

set Oct 20, 2011 by CherryBabe (280 points)
Is the word count just for part 2 or are both parts included?
I have only one request. Since WoN is most likely the only one eligible to enter right now and I doubt anyone will go back and enter the other one, just so they can enter this one, I assume this will end up having only one entry. Please, please, please, if that happens, don't post reminders every day for people to enter. If they wanted to enter, they would. Adding comments just to get more attention for your challenge and move it back to the top is not allowed in most forums and there is a good reason for that.
Having said all that, I hope that you do get more entries and that you enjoy the respones. :)
Hey!! Spots and WON! You're acting like you're making fun of me! I wouldn't do that! I know there's only going to be one or two responses so please.
And a question Spots! Why shouldn't I do reminders? And I don't do them every day. I only did it ONCE in ONE challenge.
And WON! The word count applies for only part 2 then you mix part 1 and 2
I wasn't making fun of you! I just didn't want you to think I was ignoring you or something. =)
No... Ughh just forget it.
ATTENTION! I found out Room122 are NOT doing a part 2 and that WON would be the only one who's entered. I figured out no one would actually enter this but WON so better end it. And no one should win. But I just read WON's story. And WOW I was AMAZED! I decided I will close the challenge instantly and give WON the winning pride. :) Congrats WON! LOVE your story.
CHALLENGE ENDS RIGHT HERE.
so Cherry, can we look forward to a "Finish the Story 3" in the near future?? ;)
Haha yeah, of course! Why not? ;)

1 Response

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Best response

Humor, and also an Elephant.

I woke up on my birthday morning to find an elephant. No, I’m serious; there was an elephant in the room. His gray body cast a deep shadow on the yellow of my walls and the small elephant picture on my wall. The big blue bow tied around his waist contrasted well with my red curtains. Someone must have gotten it for me as a gift. At least this mysterious gifter had the presence of mind to buy a baby elephant. A full grown adult would have dwarfed the room, making my already undersized bedroom feel small and cramped. Even this baby was making me claustrophobic. He would definitely have to live outside.

“Who bought me the elephant?” I yelled upstairs as I was getting dressed; the elephant was watching me awkwardly. Like he would rather be anywhere else than watching a teenage girl get dressed. “Yeah, well I know a lot of guys who would kill for a chance at sitting where you are right now; a couple girls too.” I smirked at him. He just huffed and looked away.

“Guys?! Who bought me the elephant?” I opened my door but no one answered my calls. It was absolutely silent up there.

I ran from my room, carefully leading Leroy (what I had decided the elephant would be called) out of my door. He only had about half an inch of room on either side of him through the door, but he made it alright and sort of nodded at me as if saying thanks. He must have been claustrophobic in there too.

END OF PART ONE. PART TWO FOLLOWS.

Once Leroy and I were out of my room, I noticed how dark it was. I peeked back into my room and saw that it was pitch black inside when I turned out the light. My clock glowed eerily in the darkness: 8:30am. Why was it so dark? In April, the sun rises much earlier than I do, lighting up my room through the blinds. And usually even at night the street lights gave some sort of glow.

The house was so dark; I had to turn on every light as I climbed the stairs. Even the giant bay window in our dining room wasn’t letting any light in. I opened the blinds and it was black. I’m not sure how else to describe it. Black and nothing.

“Okay, this is getting scary.” I looked over at Leroy. His ears were flat against his head. He looked hungry, “guys, if you’re going to give me an elephant you have to tell me how to look after it!” I tried yelling. No one responded to my call.

I opened the window in the kitchen and reached out into the dark. I stuck my arm out as far as it would go and felt my fingertips touch something hard. My fingers made a tapping sound on the object, like I was tapping on a piece of thick paper. I ran around the house and opened every window, and at the very edge of my reach I could tap on something, and every time I heard the same noise. Leroy was following as fast as his little fat body could let him as I jogged through the house, frantic.

“Come on guys! What’s going on?!” I screamed to the empty house; my voice echoed off the walls.

I jumped when I heard the music start, “MOMMY!” No one answered my shrieking and I soon recognized the song as the doorbell.

The peephole in the door showed me nothing, just the same black emptiness that filled every window. I opened the door and the black fell away.

“April fools!” A familiar voice shouted as a black box was pulled away from my door.

I looked out and saw that every window on my house had a big black box around it, “you guys are cruel.”

“And happy birthday,” My mom said, smiling like a maniac, “do you like the elephant?”

answered Oct 23, 2011 by workingoutaname (538 points)
nice idea with the boxes won! I was really confused until the end :p
plus, it's really made me want an elephant for my next birthday!
Thanks! Yeah, I thought it would be an awesome prank to pull on someone... lol!
Awesome, WON! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!
I loved the phrases you used in this. And also very nice simile. I loved the wording. I was gonna say no one will win this challenge in the end as it will only be you entering, but I am ending this right now! And you're going to be the winner. I loved it. I was feeling dull and dark inside until the end. I love the end. Nice prank mom did. I think it's a bit of a cruel prank to pull on someone too. It's scary. Love the story. Well done :)
Hey thanks, Cherry! Sweet! ;) Glad you liked it.