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Heroes and Villians

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Create a short conversation or interaction between the protagonist and antagonist. Make it long enough only to give clear characterization of both people. to make it more fun try to make the hero and villian ambigous, we don't necessarily need to know which is which as long as the writer does.

 

No word limit but don't make it longer than necessary.
set Jun 23, 2011 by leodregden (197 points)
I love this idea and I know doug will make an amazing reply if he comes back anytime soon.
I'll try to respond soon, right now I'm having a bit of a writer's block.
I'll pick a winner on the Fourth!

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"So."

"So."

"This is where you've been hiding?"

"Oh, do NOT start this again.  At least mine has a door, I mean-"

"I hate to interrupt, really, I do, but something seriously disgusting just fell on your pastry and I'd hate for you to be poisoned by a suspiciously raisin-shaped blob before I can get over there and kill you."

"Thankyou so much for the concern."

"Oh, it's truly my pleasure.  After all, we should finish this properly."

"Like gentlemen."

"Absolutely."

"In that case, I should probably tell you to move five feet to your left before something very similar lands on your head and starts eating through your scalp."

"Wha- WHAT THE HELL IS THAT?"

"Did I say look up?  At what point did I say look up? If this is going to work, you'll have to listen - it's no fun when you make up your own rules."
answered Jun 30, 2011 by Froggie (190 points)
hahaha, I really really like this! The funny ones are the best. "At what point did I say look up?" hahahaha. Love it!
That is great I'd love to hear the story behind the rest of this!
Loved it. Welcome to ThinkWrite Froggie.
This is somehow hilarious and dark without meaning to be. I love the feeling that its part of a much longer story. As Spots said welcome to thinkwrite.
:3 thanks all of you! I must admit, I've been lurking for a while and finally plucked up the courage to actually write something so thanks for the awesome welcome :)
haha, Froggie, I did that for a while too! ;) and I also neglected to welcome you in my comment up there, so, Welcome! =)
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“I finally found you.”

“So you did. Would you care for some tea?”

“I’m going to kill you, and you’re offering me tea?!”

“Yes.”

“You’re crazy!”

“Quite possibly. In fact, I’d say probably. But then, life’s no fun without a little insanity.”

Fun?! You call this FUN?!”

“I don’t think I said that… did I?”

“I’m wasting precious time trying to talk to you.”

“Then, by all means, please leave. I’d very much love to be rid of your ugly face.”

I’m ugly? Have you looked in a mirror lately?”

“I have character. You’re just boring and, yes, ugly.”

“Hah! You call that character?! Your face is a mess!”

“It’s nice to know the outside reflects the inside.”

“At least we agree on something.”

“Does that mean you’ll leave now?”

“Hardly. I’m going to kill you.”

“…”

“What? No scathing retort? No blithe dismissal? Finally realized the mess you’ve gotten yourself into now, have you?”

“The mess I’ve gotten myself into? YOU started this! YOU KILLED MY SISTER!”

“And I regret it.”

“Oh, yes, because that makes everything all better!”

“Doesn’t it?”

“No, but killing your wife did… a little.”

“Why you-!”

answered Jun 25, 2011 by Setari (79 points)
Wow, this is really well done. I can't even tell for sure which is the hero and which is the villain. It also has some humor (which I love), and there is a story here, even though it is only a dialogue. I really like this!
Loved it. Made me laugh.
Wow Love it!
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You do not understand!

 

I am defending my home land,

I am defending my home land,

By attacking your homeland.

By attacking your homeland.

We will fight you wherever we can

We will fight you wherever we can

We will not lose despite your efforts.

We will not lose despite your efforts.

You have committed atrocities

You have committed atrocities

Killing woman and children.

Killing woman and children.

Our young men are sacrificed

Our young men are sacrificed

On the altar of your lies.

On the altar of your lies.

You twist the word of God

You twist the word of God

For you own ends.

For you own ends.

History will condemn you,

History will condemn you,

You are an evil empire,

You are an evil empire,

Only of self importance.

Only of self importance.

 

You do not understand!

answered Jun 25, 2011 by Saxon (596 points)
I understand! You bring across a very fair point.
This is really good too!
Wow I like this, for some reason I feel like theres could be more, Is there anything you edited out?
Not so much edited out, just not included.
A=ok i was just wondering if you had a finally ending or just left as is, it's good either way
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“You’re serious, aren’t you?”

“Completely.”

“You know that it's going to kill you too, right?”

“The sacrifice involved is acceptable.”

“You’re going to kill millions of people.”

“The sacrifice involved is acceptable.”

“But…”

“No! Read my lips, the sacrifice involved is acceptable.”

BOOM
answered Jun 30, 2011 by workingoutaname (538 points)
edited Jun 30, 2011 by workingoutaname
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"What are you doing?!"

"Don't ask; the answer will only result in frustration and denial."

"You cant do this, you mad man!!"

*Bomb ticks faster*

"No! You cant kill millions of people like this!"
answered Jun 30, 2011 by chiapet57 (14 points)
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P: "I'm disappointed in you."
A: "I'm doing the best I can."
P: "It's not good enough!"
A: "I swear, I'll kill you with my bare hands!"
P: "You can try..."
A: "I will. Someday... I promise you, Peter."
P: "Oh, Ally. My, dear, sweet Ally. You are so cute when you're mad. Now get back to work or you'll never see that brat of yours again!"
answered Jul 9, 2011 by Spots (867 points)
A bit late and a poor attempt, but I'm trying to get back to writing.
It wasn't that poor, I liked the fact that you could make it dark with such a short response