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Right and Left

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You know the idiom, the right hand doesn't know what the left is doing? Write a dialogue between two hands, under 400 words, where they communicate what they have been doing. This can be serious or funny. I'll have a look after June 20th. Have fun!
set Jun 5, 2011 by bye (133 points)
edited Jun 7, 2011 by bye
Wait, can it be in like a script style? Like for example:

Thumb: Hi!

Index Finger: Bye!

It's obviously going to be continued, but can we do that?
Yes, any style you like!

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The captain sits in his commanding chair an earpiece pushed into his ear, connected to his twin brother in his opposite ship. He always thought his brother was a bit backwards though. Choosing to name his shift lefty instead of an amazing name like righty was just.... strange! 

"Lefty come in, this is righty, are you ready to perform the manuevers?"
Righty this is lefty, we are a go."

And with that, the swinging starts. 

"Lefty this is Righty, we are maneuvering forward, meeting with the other team's Lefty, and retracting, are you ready to meet with the other team's Righty?"
"That's a yes Righty, Lefty meeting other team's Righty."

"Good Lefty, ready to meet each other?"

"Righty, that is a go."
 

The captain sighs as he comes close to the end of the manuevers. Sitting up straight, his eyes widen. 
"Lefty! You're coming in too fast! Slow down!"

"Righty, calm down, it'll just cause a little jostle."

They both stumble as they feel the impact, moving back to repeat the manuever over and over again.

 

"Patty cake patty cake....."

answered Jun 10, 2011 by TheRunawayHeart (274 points)
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The world changed a lot for Left, after Right disappeared. It got more work to do, more weight to carry, more keys to press. The first two weeks were so tough, Left thought it would never be able to cope. It had to complete complex tasks it never had to try before. It failed at many of them, letting its human down. It could feel his resignation when he let it fall limp after repeatedly dropping the tool. 

How it missed Right. Right knew how to do all that and it was stronger and more agile. Right always helped Left with the hard things and shared with it all the nice things, like holding other letfs and rights or scratching the dog and the cat.
But, over time, Left got better at its tasks. It grew stronger and could now carry more weight than ever before, it could open jars and squeeze lemons.
 
And then, one day, Right was back.
"Oh, Left, it's so good to see you. It's so good to see anyone!" 
"Where have you been, Right? Look! Look what I can do!"
"I've been to a dark, dark place, kid. Oh, it hurt so much for a long time. And it was dark and uncomfortable. I coulnd't move at all. I thought I'd never get out. But, here I am, good as new. Well, a bit weak, but that will sort itself out soon enough."
"Right?"
"Yes?"
"I'm so glad you're back."
"Me too, kid, me too."
answered Jul 9, 2011 by Spots (867 points)