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ThinkWrite Challenge LXIX

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Thank you again Ladyhwin, I did not expect anything to come of one story after not writing for so long... But here is the new list! Have fun! 2 is the number! So 22 words, 222 words or as many twos as you want. 2222.2?

 

Break

Wonder

Yawn

Listen

Truth

Reward

Time

Patience

Sacrifice

Violet

 

Again we will go for a fortnight, ending on the 6th of May. Looking forward to all of your stories!
set Apr 22, 2011 by Nylecoj (63 points)
Two weeks are up tomorrow, any last minute entries..?

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He looked at his companions and knew that there was only one who would listen. They were all close but he was the closest. At day break he awoke to a dim violet lit world, woke his friend and together they went out into the cool morning air. In the olive grove he paused and then spoke. He explained that there was to be a sacrifice and asked for his friend for help.  Still half asleep his companion suppressed a yawn as he slowly understood what was being asked of him.

“None of the others would understand” he explained, “but in time they will know why this must be”. His companion took time to reply as the truth sunk in. This was not what he had expected and he felt numb at the prospect. “There will be no reward for you here; no one else will understand and there is no one closer to me than you. You are the only one I can ask.” His friend in patience wonder and horror paused before slowly replying. It was not an easy request to understand

“Lord, if that is what is needed, then I will betray you, even if I am cursed throughout time.”

answered Apr 23, 2011 by Saxon (596 points)
Love this.... A very interesting view of the betrayal...
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I know I can't be chosen for the torchbearer again, but here's my contribution to get you all started!!  Love the list, Nyle!!  :)

 

A breathless hush fell over the company as the young man stood.  His face was illuminated in the firelight, his violet eyes glinted frighteningly.  The intensity of his stance captured the attention of everyone; no longer did they yawn in response to endless speeches and meaningless words.  What the King had to say was important, and they would listen to his words with interest.

Slowly the young man raised his eyes from the dying fire and looked over his companions with an expression of sadness and longing.  He wished he could tell them that his time had been well-spent.  The truth, however, would be far worse than that simple lie.

He opened his mouth to break the silence, then caught sight of the people’s faces as they gazed up at him.  Their patience could have been such a great reward, had he done what he should have.  Many had sacrificed their lives for this night, few knew the reason.

With a sigh and a deep breath, the young king fixed his gaze on the face of the lovely girl on the edge of the company.  She alone knew what he was about to say and the sorrow of this knowledge filled her eyes with tears.  He wondered at her devotion.  Slowly, his voice cracking, he began to speak, dreading the inevitable reactions.

answered Apr 23, 2011 by ladyhwin (195 points)
Great start! Now I am curious as to what he is going to say...
Don't ask me!  I have no idea what he's going to say....
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"Patience is the key!" A whole crowd of us were standing on a street in a small town in England. We were all waiting to see what the sacrifice was to give to the Queen. The man next to me had a huge yawn. It was taking forever. I felt a tugging on my skirt. I looked down. A little girl was standing there with a Violet for me. Then I gently knelt down and put my hands around her tiny ones. "Thank you" I said. The girl put the flower in my hands then ran off. "Listen!" shouted somebody. You could faintly hear horses clomping in the distance. "The time has come!" shouted an eager man. Then I saw a dog.

  

answered Apr 24, 2011 by ross19 (142 points)
I like how you described the horses coming "clomping" fits your scene perfectly!
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327 words, and no title...well, there's a 2 in there. This got away from me, it's been revised and pared down, but can't really get it any shorter I don't think... 

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I break the tedium with a yawn and wonder if anyone has had the temerity to listen a word I say. Truth is, this has taken too long to let anyone mess it up for me now. The time, the patience that has gone into planning tonight…I will reap the reward of my sacrifice! I look up at the sun, setting like a violet bruise across the sky, and close my eyes. I stand with a sigh, gently counting under my breath. So much planning, so much thought has gone into this. Night’s inky blackness is now creeping into the room, but thankfully no-one makes a sound. From the corner of my eye I see a flash of light and spin round, but it is simply someone checking their phone. He raises scared, apologetic hands, but I have already turned and started to quietly pace the floor, knowing there is no cell reception in here. Head bowed and deep in thought, I almost miss the tell-tale noise from below, the slamming of the front door. Someone has entered the building. The last of the natural light is almost gone from the room, but there is enough that everyone can see my raised hands. A sound at the door, a key in the lock. It turns, and it’s almost as if the world is holding its breath. The door opens, and a figure is framed in the doorway, hand straying towards the light, flipping it on.

 “Surprise! Happy birthday baby,” I yell, running to her and scooping her up in my arms. I can see that she’s crying, obviously overcome with joy. I knew the restraining order was a mistake, and I lead her into the apartment. All our friends are there, strangely subdued, but I put that down to the tape over their mouths and round their wrists. I kick the door closed behind me and whisper in my baby’s ear “Let’s get this party started”

answered May 4, 2011 by morshy (197 points)
I love your description of the sunset "I look up at the sun, setting like a violet bruise across the sky..."!
I love the lead into a mysterious fear, which a birthday party can be--fearful. Then, joy! It's a fun time.
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Thank you everyone for writing, you all did great! Saxon, here is the torch, don't get burned! Looking forward to seeing your word list!
answered May 6, 2011 by Nylecoj (63 points)
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A bit too late, but I couldn't pass up the oportunity to get the 22 word version in:

 

 

I wonder what can break this yawning, listening to Violet admit the truth. Time and patience are my sacrifice.  And my reward?
answered May 13, 2011 by Spots (867 points)
Hhmmm.... very nice for 22 words, it would make a good beginning to a longer story perhaps :)