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Alphabetical order with a twist

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In continuing our "letter" challenge I have chosen the alphabet.  But don't think it will be that easy.  For this challenge you must write a story or poem that uses the alphabet in alphabetical order, but oh, it's not even that easy.  The first sentence must start with the letter "A" in the beginning word.  The following sentence must use "B" as the final letter of the sentence.  Then carry that forward until the whole alphabet is used in its entirety and in order.  Yes, the story or poem must make sense or points will be deducted.  Being that all stories must follow the same format, I will pass the torch to the story that best uses the alphabet.  Good luck, and if you have any questions or think I'm just plain crazy....keep it to yourselves :)

Doug
set Mar 24, 2011 by doug (883 points)
edited Apr 29, 2011 by ThinkWrite

Any time limit? Not an easy one so a week or so would be nice, you rotten pleb. Can't understand why! Sorry, but is this what is needed! LOL

Oh, sorry bout' that.  How about April 6th.  Didn't you say to make it a "challenge"? :)  Puts the 'THINK" into ThinkWrite I believe.
Ok, I horribly confused everyone.  Why do I have to try to be so "difficult"?  Give your all, but try to stay within the framework of the challenge, please.  I hid my response as I blew it.  I'll try again.
Put it back and just add the new one!

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Abigale loved to color. She would color anything; books, walls, tables – one time she even colored a light bulb. Colors lit her world – she couldn’t stand anything being colorless. For her second birthday, she got her first box of crayons, and she got her fifth box for her third. Even though she was little, she didn’t break them or lose them – she used them up until there was nothing left to color with.

Abigale didn’t have a favorite color – she would use any and all when coloring paper and chairs and a shelf. Green was the color the other kids used for trees, but she colored the trees in her book with as many colors as she could. She thought each leaf should be a different color, and used different colors on every branch.

I know you’re thinking that kids don’t color like that, but Abigale did. She was special – she could name all the colors and create art, but couldn’t recognize the letter J. Kids her age were learning how to talk and recognize shapes and ABC’s. Abigale wasn’t concerned with those; her world was too colorful.

Maybe it was wrong, but her parents encouraged her coloring. She was strange, and never took interest in any of her toys, until she got that first box – then an artist was born. Oh, how excited she was when she learned how to color. Her parents stopped trying to teacher her to talk and count – they gave her the tools and let her talent pop.

Questions were raised. Why can she create art but not put two words together? She smiled and laughed as she colored – that was all that mattered to her, so that was all that mattered to her parents. They wanted her happy, and coloring was what did that.

Unfortunately, not all stories have a happy ending, and Abigale’s story is a tragedy. She was coloring with her sidewalk chalk and was hit by an SUV. Words cannot express the beauty that left the world that day. Her parents lost joy and laughter and any reason to relax. Yesterday was her funeral. The music they played was jazz.

answered Apr 6, 2011 by midnightpoet (583 points)
edited Apr 6, 2011 by midnightpoet
Sad end, but I think we are all a bit down.
Midnight:  I do miss you horribly on this site and I'm glad you came back to us even if it is for a brief time.  I understand if you don't want to carry the torch for this alphabet challenge, but I do pass it on to you.  If you look back at the previous threads, there was a Queen Squires Quest that followed a double letter challenge.  I think you can get the idea of what the challenge is about from these three challenges.  If you decide to not carry the torch let me know.  Sorry if I didn't go into detail about your wonderfully appropriate story, but I am still in shock at Emy's and Giraffes passing.
Doug, thank you. It's strange - I was notified via my other forums about Emy's passing. I was, as you said, in shock. Then I came here the other night. I wanted to write, but had no inspiration, and then I saw the news about Giraffe. I haven't been here in a couple months - and I couldn't believe that's what I came back to. It was very much the inspiration to this story. As far as taking the torch, I would be honored to. I did look back at the challenges - it wasn't surprising to me that this started with a challenge from Emy - she always had the most wonderful ideas. So, in taking the torch, I need to start a challenge that involves the alphabet, correct?
Yes, I do believe that is the gist of it.  Thanks for accepting the torch.  This "alphabet" idea is a great one and I'd like to see it continue.
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Alphabet Soup

Around midday I grew tired of being a “celeb”. Carrying that “star” moniker wherever I went became too burdensome. Days would pass before I could lay my head down to sleep and I did just like the dead. Each day that I did get to snooze, I would rise like the freak zombie in the picture shows. My fans never seemed to mind my mindless state as they still cheered for every clef. Getting to know some of them was the easiest part. Ridding myself of the truly fanatical groupies became a problem. One day though my manager suggested I carry a knife neatly tucked away in a sheath. I didn’t see the problem with it until it was too late.

It was Cincinnati and I had just finished doing a show for 20,000 fans half of them members of W.O.J.

Knife at hip side I began the semi hidden walk to my tour bus. Little did I know that a crazed member of the W.O.J (World Order of Jews) had snuck beneath the tarps and was set to throw a bomb shell. Meant for my head it landed a few feet away and exploded a nearby popcorn stand. I was a bit shell shocked, but I managed to pull my knife and with more precision than a drunken rock star should have I hurled the blade at my opponent before he could turn. Off his left finger went and that ended his assault with a quickness.

I made it to the tour bus just in time to watch my favorite musical show Sock Hop. Quietly, but with determination I steered my six-five frame over to the recliner situated close by. Did you hear. Singing came from outside the bus. Tens of thousands of fans had made their way over to my bus and began singing my latest hit. Unable to watch the tube any longer I opened the door and gave a wave. The crowd erupted in cheers and rushed towards where I was beaming full of lov’.

When the last of the deafening sound had muted to a soft hush I gave a wave and returned to my bus. When I turned around Isabel, my drummer, was standing there naked and we had passionate sex.

Yes, the life of a rock star.

I wonder what it would have been like if I played Jazz. 

answered Mar 25, 2011 by doug (883 points)
edited Mar 30, 2011 by doug
Well, there you go.  Let's see what you think of that.  Let the challenge begin :)
Failed on the second sentence and then again and again! L OL Is this too hard even for the person who set it?
Wow Saxon,  I guess I should have let that one perculate a bit before submitting.  In my own defense I wrote it before bed time, but that's no excuse.  I failed, but I will not give up.  How's yours coming?  I'll fix mine and resubmit it, but I'll leave the original up so others can have a giggle too.
Slowly! It is the last letter thing that is getting me. But, hay, that is what a challenge is all about. And you complained about Q. LOL
If you start with the title line I kept the sequence going for a little while...
LOL a good player if nothing else! Lets keep it simpler next time around. LOL
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All in all it was going to be a good weekend. He was very relaxed, but he needed to keep in mind, one way or another, the new job. Call it what you would, work was work and it paid the bills. With the world in the mess it was, he would have to work until he was dead. Everyone seemed to be in the same boat. Political corruption was everywhere and it had an unpleasant whiff. Goodness knows where it would all end.

Now it was time for a walk on the heath. In all his years in politics this had always been his escape. Even in the good old days, it had helped calm many a Raj. Kings could do no worse than take a break in the fresh air. It was a good excuse whenever you got the call. Most of the time it was just a walk. Occasionally, very occasionally, it was a way to vent anger and get rid of bad feels or clear the air after people had been mean. On this afternoon it was a mixture of sentiments that drove him out.

It was bright sunlight when he set out and he was glad to leave behind all the pomp. Quaint old customs were delightful, but one needed a break from them to clear the mind. He felt like some fictional character on a hidden quest by Tolkien, a modern day Strider. Suddenly all his cares departed and he was just enjoying the walk on the heath. He quickened his pace then slowed again, felt the fresh air in his lungs and the ground under his feet. Unaware of the rest of the world he walked on and on.

He turned down a familiar track and heard a car rev. With sadness reality returned in a rush but the walk had done him good. Mind cleared and refreshed he could face the problems of the world and the fairer sex. Yes, life would be good and all would be well. This time tomorrow the old Prince would be the new King, but for now he would allow the chauffeur to drive him back to the ancient city of Fez.

answered Mar 25, 2011 by Saxon (664 points)
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All I've ever wanted is a bit of independence, a little trust and respect. The problem is, we live in the middle of nowhere, a pathetic little village stuck out on a limb. Civilisation is an hour's bus ride away, and that means all the nosey grannies can see where you've been – and with whom.

It's like living out your whole life in front of a panel of judges, if you put a single foot wrong the gossip goes round the village within ten minutes, and before you even get home you're grounded. Even with all the freedom in the world, it's still a dull place to exist unless you can drive, which I can't, not for a couple of years yet.

It was Nicky's idea to go clubbing; she suggested it casually as she gazed in her bedroom mirror, pouting to herself.

Go clubbing?” I echoed in surprise, knowing she was serious, recognising that mischievous tone in her voice. She grinned and said, “Don't worry, we'll be back before the neighbours' curtains twitch!”

It was like watching someone else's life unfurl: the usual trip to town but then getting changed under the fluorescent lights of a pub toilet, slicking on make-up and trying to look older, then Nicky breezing confidently past the bouncers as I shuffled in nervously behind her.

It was all going just fine until Nicky went and lied to the DJ.

Keep smiling, I've just told him it's your eighteenth!” she exclaimed.

That was the turning point; he gave us each free champagne and a 'birthday cocktail'. My previous experience of alcohol had been limited to a glass of wine on special occasions, perhaps a small cider on a hot summer's day. The champagne was bitter and its sharp bubbles stung the back of my nose, but I pretended I was used to it, and drank it straight down. On the dancefloor was a mass of heaving bodies, moving and bouncing to the heavy bass beat that thumped up through the floor, and we threw ourselves into the moves we'd practised so many times in our bedrooms. I had to drag Nicky away after a while because I was so thirsty, and we downed our fruity cocktails with a gulp.

Quite what happened after that, I'm not entirely sure. There was more dancing, and more drinking, and I think we talked to some boys, flashes of memory smudged into a blur.

Sobering up abruptly some hours later, I became aware of the heavy, shuddering growl of a diesel engine, and realised Nicky had managed to get us onto the first bus of the day. My head reeled and throbbed, and my throat felt swollen, but worst of all was the sickening, gut-wrenching guilt. Uneasily, I took stock of my surroundings, Nicky slouched, dozing, across the back seat, looking tired but graceful, my own straggly reflection in the window superimposed against the hazy purple dawn. My cheeks flushed as I realised the only other passenger was gawping at us in our short skirts, so I scowled and managed to croak at him, “Perv!”

Whether I slept, I don't know, I was still in a daze as the familiar route flashed by against the lightening sky. I do remember that when we got to our stop, the sudden effort of standing up made my stomach lurch, and I retched against the bus shelter, eyes watering with the acrid taste, hating my own body's reflex.

Your shoe's got sick on it,” Nicky had pointed out helpfully as we stumbled home as quietly as we could, vowing never to drink again (until next time). It's not at all how I expected it to be, going out on the razz.

answered Mar 26, 2011 by Hobbes (25 points)
Got all the letters in place as far as I can see and a good story as well. Not an easy challenge. Good luck and lets see if anyone can do better!
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"Hoosegow" by Ron

Another rehab... Cute boy in the next bed. Everyone here hates the staff. God I want to get high. I found out his name is Raj. Keep hoping my Mom will call. Man! Oh man I can't sleep. Raj can't either or so he says. They take me to see the shrink - the guru. Valium now? Xanax always makes me sleepy. Zzzz...
answered Mar 26, 2011 by anotherronism (251 points)
I'm not sure this follows the rules. Your challenge says the first sentence must start with "A" and the NEXT sentence must end in "B" but then your own entry starts and ends the SAME sentence with consecutive letters so I was confused. Anyways - just killing time.
I left out Q. I thought something was funny when I finished with a single letter remaining. Yikes!
What a great short version of the challange, not 100% in line with the rules, but to get it done in so few words is amazing! Congratulations
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A caB Cought a Dog and took it to thE pound. at Five o,clock the doG got a new Home! It lived with a Jack rabbit named Kacey! Like a Minute later the dogs owner came in. No it was a evel Owner. He named the dog Porky. So they went to dairy Queen. Some one told kasey he was Really! So They all went home. soon Uncle Victer Went to our house! He brought me a Xylaphone and a Yo-yo. Soon aunt Zee came and that is the alphabet!
answered Mar 27, 2011 by lilymuffin (18 points)